tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.comments2009-11-02T14:28:29.508-06:00~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080drewsimstories@gmail.comBlogger523125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-27500114916571677962009-11-02T14:28:29.508-06:002009-11-02T14:28:29.508-06:00Hi Sam! Nice to meet you!<br /><br />I was on here answering another comment when yours posted, wow, I am really impressed, you read the whole thing??<br />The relationships are certainly twisted together, layered, good way to put it!! I am so pleased the plots and characters are keeping your interest.<br /><br />I liked Dennis too, that was hard for me to do, killing him off.<br /><br />Again, thanks so much!!<br /><br />And many more updates to come in December when I return from a trip, I have a lot done already! LOL!<br />Do come back again and comment, cheers!~~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-81613882853459900352009-11-02T14:23:50.294-06:002009-11-02T14:23:50.294-06:00Thanks Iron Mum, Poor Dennis is right, what a way to go. <br /><br />Liam is obsessed with Maggie, and if he can recreate when he and Maggie were the most happy (in bed) he will do it with Donna. Yuck.<br />Liam has some issues, LOL!<br /><br />Cheers, more on this when I get back In December, thanks mate!!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-75584150030752001422009-11-02T14:22:04.061-06:002009-11-02T14:22:04.061-06:00Hi!<br />I just wanted to tell you how truly awesome I think this story is! I&#39;ve read through the whole series starting from the beginning with part 00 in Crime Story~1964 and I just love it! The intrigues and the relations between the characters is so interesting and so layered, everytime I think I&#39;ve figured it all out you suprise me with something new.<br /><br />I really liked Dennis! I feel so sorry for him, ending up like that! Horrible last day...<br /><br />Thanks for a great story! Keep up the good work! I&#39;ll make sure to check in on you for updates later on...<br /><br />Take it easy! / SamSamathanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-40443651001830152492009-11-02T13:59:54.078-06:002009-11-02T13:59:54.078-06:00Oh my god! poor Dennis.<br />I&#39;m not sure of Donna, why does Liam react like that when she&#39;s around could he be druged and how.<br />Great story, I&#39;m bouncing with anticipation for the next part.iron mumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18354625264650096646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-47924908814038825772009-11-02T09:26:44.041-06:002009-11-02T09:26:44.041-06:00Hi Gayl, Yes, Ronan is a monster, and<br />his rampage is only beginning.<br /><br />Liam is a weak man when it comes to Mags and a substitute is proving to be far great a temptation. Hopefully, this will not last long.<br />Yeah, I can safely say that is it for Joey and Donna.<br />Thanks, appreciated.<br />Keiran will return, but I can&#39;t say he has a big plot line in this.<br />At least, not like Liam, LOL<br />Cheers~~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-39113173479773638912009-11-01T20:23:15.170-06:002009-11-01T20:23:15.170-06:00RIP Dennis. What a horrible way to go. And Ronan is an absolute monster.<br /><br />Liam has a glimmer of happiness like he is capable of moving on and then falls back into the black pit. And Donna playing along just makes it worse. I am glad that Joey is going to try and move on. Who would have ever thought that those two would not have survived after how long they waited for each other.<br /><br />Really well done! This one really had a lot of action, lots happening. And I am looking forward to Keiran&#39;s return!Gaylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09476656359810192923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-8719565456372638902009-11-01T08:37:00.526-06:002009-11-01T08:37:00.526-06:00Thanks jaundyce,<br /><br />We will see how it goes for sick Liam, Darcy seems a sweet girl for him, can she reach him? Why would she want to?<br />Joey? My lips are sealed.<br />Thanks again!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-37568615049443705762009-11-01T08:35:02.197-06:002009-11-01T08:35:02.197-06:00SB,<br /><br />Yep, a lot of sick people, what can I say? LOL!<br /><br />Good comparison for Vinnie, he is quite put out his kids have turned their back on him, should be interesting to see how it plays out.<br /><br />Thanks!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-32455237593302527632009-11-01T08:32:49.903-06:002009-11-01T08:32:49.903-06:00Thanks Anon, glad you liked. I felt bad for Dennis too.~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-56685362485808857082009-10-31T15:24:15.705-05:002009-10-31T15:24:15.705-05:00wow, that was really tense and exciting, I feel bad for Dennis, dying alone, great update!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-2492121883948143212009-10-30T16:44:44.504-05:002009-10-30T16:44:44.504-05:00Poor Dennis, but then somebody&#39;s got to die here to make way for the new blood! <br /><br />Liam is giving me the creeps. You&#39;ve got him set up with that nice girl Darcy and he&#39;s playing some kind of bizarre game with Donna? Be there so he can pretend she&#39;s Maggie? That is sick. And she&#39;s sicker than he is to go along with it.<br /><br />Vinnie is an old monster. The kind of Greek god who eats his own kids to prevent them from overthrowing him. Horrible man.<br /><br />Great sexy shots and such tension! Wonderful wonderful update!!S.B.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15236399168777815648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-63686994709594722792009-10-29T18:30:33.718-05:002009-10-29T18:30:33.718-05:00I had to read again, this is great stuff. Juicy and entertaining!<br />I loved Liam&#39;s and Darcy&#39;s date. &#39;She smelled of mustard...&#39; that was great. I do hope you get them together at some time.<br />And Joey deserves a nice lady, is it Fallon, or are you teasing us? lol!<br />wow, poor Dennis, I still feel bad, this was great!<br /><br />jaundyceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-62854207671264634742009-10-29T10:12:00.808-05:002009-10-29T10:12:00.808-05:00Yea Sandy, you are back!! I feel really bad I caused such an emotional reaction, but on the other hands, I love it! LOL!<br /><br />You bring up a good point, as heartbreaking as it was Dennis was alone, it would have been worse for Tyler, and Regan. And their two kids.<br />And Veronica, it will affect them all.<br /><br />Liam is weak for sure, he always was, if it concerned Maggie. She still haunts him. And now it continues, hopefully not for long! LOL!<br />And isn&#39;t Deanna a little sweetie? More scenes with her and Liam in the future.<br />You know, I think Darcy is just what Liam needs, so different from Maggie, open, bubbly, fun. Can she reach across that chasm, would she even want to? We will see...<br /><br />Very good reflection on Vinnie and his children. He did expect something, their loyalty. They did not give it. Not sure if he would hurt his kids, good question!! I don&#39;t think so, but I suppose that is how far he is pushed...you have given me something to think about!!<br /><br />Patrick? In Danger? My lips are sealed...LOL!<br /><br />Thanks so much Sandy mate...and sorry about Dennis, I am sorry to see him go as well.<br />Cheers!!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-5306232298814091502009-10-29T09:59:45.973-05:002009-10-29T09:59:45.973-05:00Van,<br /><br />Donna has big time issues. The girl needs help. First she tossed hottie Joey to the curb? Nuts. She is infatuated, maybe even a little obsessed. Jeez, her and Liam can obsess together. One thing, I promise not to drag this out, LOL!<br />And that is all it is to Liam, a slam-bang on the side.<br /><br />LOL! Yes, actually they would make great looking kids. We will see...<br /><br />Oh yes, lots of guilt and angst coming down the pike, cheers and thanks Van!! I need the break, LOL!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-33961065946739855852009-10-29T09:55:03.111-05:002009-10-29T09:55:03.111-05:00Wow.<br /><br />Thanks Silakas, I am pleased they way those last few shots turned out, and when it started raining I thought &quot;Bonus!!&quot; And then I just knew what to call this chapter. Poor Dennis.<br />I liked Liam went to see Joey as well. Liam really wants to try.<br />But...yes, that downward spiral.<br />Cheers and thanks so much!!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-54737943506587687462009-10-29T09:52:22.861-05:002009-10-29T09:52:22.861-05:00Oh, and yes, the &#39;every Saturday Night&#39; thing, LOL! We will see how long that lasts. It is a real ick factor here.<br /><br />And I am just getting warmed up with Ronan...LOL!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-6028463692451311932009-10-29T09:49:58.698-05:002009-10-29T09:49:58.698-05:00Hoooo boy. Donna has some issues. I mean, I get that she finds Liam to be good in bed, but to the point where it&#39;s worth it to pretend that she&#39;s her dead mother? Crazy. Hopefully Liam and Darcy&#39;s relationship progresses to the point where he doesn&#39;t feel the need to bang Donna on the side anymore...<br /><br />Joey and Fallon would make some good-looking children. Just sayin&#39; *cough*<br /><br />RIP Dennis :( Ronan is such a creep, and this is going to bring up some serious guilt in Tyler.<br /><br />Nice work. Have fun on your break :)Dinurielhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09325395792013382406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-91274078399500528432009-10-29T09:49:27.687-05:002009-10-29T09:49:27.687-05:00Cherie mate!!<br /><br />Yes, Liam and Vinnie, not close now. Vinnie is only happy when his kids are doing what he says. They certainly dropped him like a hot potato when he got arrested, LOL! I can understand why he is bitter, and 2 of them married cops, LOL! Nah, Liam would never join forces with the DA, he wouldn&#39;t cooperate, in fact, he didn&#39;t.<br /><br />Liam is starting to feel that guilt pick away at him, like when talking with Joey, it was a good conversation, maybe they can try and work things out, now with Keiran coming back.<br />But then, Liam just goes and blows it later in the chapter, LOL!<br /><br />Poor Dennis, looking for love, not having much luck. You are right, if the spark is not there, you can&#39;t force it. I think it is there with Nick, we will see! LOL!<br /><br />I like Fallon already. She did want to dance a jig when she heard he was free, however, not sure Joey is ready for another relationship. WE will see.<br /><br />You know, Darcy and Liam look really good together in the game. The Liam sim does not smile much, but he does when I put Darcy in the room with him, I love it when that happens!<br />The Liam sim is very affectionate with his daughter Deanna, too. Awww. Don&#39;t care for sim kids in my stories, but I think Deanna is staying, LOL!<br /><br />Thanks you Cherie!!! I am having a blast doing this, pushing that envelope. And yes, writing outside my element, the crime stuff, is challenging and I love it! It is just a big old messy soap opera/crime thing all in a blender, LOL!!! Thanks mate! So glad you liked it!!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-10138765989735718742009-10-29T09:36:51.583-05:002009-10-29T09:36:51.583-05:00goldie,<br /><br />you pretty much summed up poor Dennis&#39; last moments. What a way to go.<br />LOL! That&#39;s one way to categorize Liam, &#39;multi-faceted&#39; I guess it is true, guess that is why I enjoy focusing on him so much, and will he blow it with Darcy? Time will tell.<br />thanks so very much.~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-19156691267176751762009-10-29T09:28:10.103-05:002009-10-29T09:28:10.103-05:00LOL! Yes Lunar, kicked things up a notch for sure.<br /><br />Thanks about the shots of Donna and Liam, too bad that other one got deleted, it was pretty good, too. Not one for messing with my shots much, but I did go into photoshop under filter/render/lighting effects to make it seems that Liam was seeing all this unfold in some dark haze.<br />Liam...is sexy. For all his flaws, at least to me, and yes, he is very protective of his daughters, bonus sexy marks there.<br /><br />Vinnie is a force, even in prison, yes...worry.<br />And that could have been Tyler is right, and it will slam him hard,<br />thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed!!~Drewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04455699819585437080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-923441998864275912009-10-28T22:52:55.163-05:002009-10-28T22:52:55.163-05:00OMG... trouble coming a mile away! You&#39;ve certainly revved up this second part, haven&#39;t you? Loving it though.<br /><br />Those pics of Donna and Liam-- steamy! I loved the effects that make them partially dark. The one where she&#39;s nealing... hot! And at the same time I feel so dirty. Woman is pretending to be her mom to get herself some! I don&#39;t think any of us need the why explained though. XD<br /><br />I have to say that the way he wants to protect his daughters from his father is very sexy. I seem to like protectors though if you can tell.<br /><br />The whole thing with Vinnie has me worried. Especially since he&#39;s thinking about Patrick, AND he knows about Keiran&#39;s wife. Oh man!<br /><br />And poor Dennis! Dang, that could have been Tyler. Ronan is as frightening as he appeared in the last chapter.The Lunar Foxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-43882159858946302072009-10-28T22:07:32.754-05:002009-10-28T22:07:32.754-05:00This was excellent. It had it all. Tense, emotional and yes, heartbreaking. Poor Dennis, what a way to end up. Alone in a dirty lot, breathing your last in the rain against a dumpster. Powerful stuff here.<br />Liam is turning into a multi-faceted character. I liked his date with Darcy, she just maybe the woman for him, will he blow it?<br />And his relationship with his little girl is wonderful.<br /><br />Excellent.<br /><br />goldieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-91408778654094042632009-10-28T20:27:23.781-05:002009-10-28T20:27:23.781-05:00OOoh tense opening, Liam and Vinnie who used to be so close now at odds and perhaps Liam is thinking of joining forces with the DA nah I doubt it but I somehow wonder if perhaps his cousins arrival will bring him to seek some form of justice against the nasty old business. And as much as Vinnie hates the fact that Keiran married the cop he softened to hear he has a grandson. I shudder to think what he would do with the boy should he ever get his hands on him. Probably corrupt the poor kid before he even knew what was happening. 80) <br /><br />Ok really nice conversation between Liam and Joey although that last thought was a bit disturbing at least he is going to try and get rid of his guilt. Start to live again and stay away from the little chit. Gosh I hope she doesn’t end up preggo, that would be awkward, “Joey I am pregnant and it might be yours or your brothers!” That would ruin everything the family is trying to do!!! *shudder* Excellent!!! I really hope this family works it out and grows closer draws forces to run the bad seed distant cousin out. LOL! 80) <br /><br />I want to cry for Dennis but I want to cry more for Veronica, LOL! Heavy petting is that what that was, LOL! Hmmm… Nick or Dennis, two gorgeous men and Veronica with her desire to be loved yet being sick of men. Great twists and tangles… On that note, how could Dennis tie himself down when he doesn’t feel that spark, lonely is right but… Well… She did the right thing unless he wakes up one day and realizes he is allowing his personal torment over the loss of Teena to rule his life. <br /><br />OOH Fallon Go Joey GO Fallon, she seems definitely lust struck and even better perfect material LOL! I wonder why indeed her friend didn’t prepare her. Perhaps an attempted match LOL! Although I smell T-R-O-U-B-L-E especially in regards to a certain unwilling to grow up young woman. LOL! <br /><br />I was jumping in my seat, the heat is so there with liam and darcy and the genuine affection his want to not intimidate her and then his thoughts of Maggie. Ok At least he is trying to get over her, but can or will Darcy wait through the long haul. Ok I know I certainly would at this point. He has made such a turn around, a bad boy trying to make it honestly doing his all! <br /><br />This sounds really ominous I mean Tyler getting off the hook with the boring ol stakeout with the new Heroine dealers and Dennis taking it, unless of course he is going to meet a bad girl I am starting to worry. Maybe it is just poor lonely dennis shining through. Which you have done a magnificent job of btw! <br /><br />To see Liam relaxed with his little girl, admit he loved her and WOW what an intelligent little thing, then that damned girl calling!!! Same room BLEH! LOL! And I am thoroughly disgusted! He is living in a sick dream world all at her hands! Every Saturday come on man get over it refuse don’t go!!! Oh I feel sick at the thought then again LOL! Maybe this is what he needs to finally get Maggie out of his system, I just hope that Darcy doesn’t find out… <br /><br />OH CRAP!!! Dennis oh Poor Dennis I knew it and Ronan, he may be a looker but he is a dirty and very lethal scum bag… *Wiping tears for dennis* Cold Ruthless… <br /><br />DREW!! I am utterly breathless this was fast paced, frightening loving emotional and painful all in one, you have truly captured the essence of your characters and in the crime! Ok what fun is it to be writing without at least getting to write stuff you would never in your life dream of committing yet have fun explaining. <br /><br />BRAVO!!!!cheripyehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04482328081343691432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-71585165665740191872009-10-28T19:29:50.277-05:002009-10-28T19:29:50.277-05:00This really packed a wallop. Amazing on so many levels. The last few shots with Ronan and Dennis were by far, one of the most tense scenes I have seen in a sims story. Tragic and heartbreaking.<br />And Liam continues his downward spiral, though Darcy looks like she may be his lifeline.<br />I liked Liam went to see Joey.<br /><br />great, great update.<br /><br />silakasAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3573581929884427306.post-43037510563378271012009-10-28T17:41:53.443-05:002009-10-28T17:41:53.443-05:00at the end I meant to say<br /><br />&quot;you broke my heart with Denis&#39; dead, but I did LOVE this chapter...<br /><br />LOL...<br />--sorry my keyboard acts crazy sometimes... at it just deletes whatever it wants without me noticing it... :PS@ndyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13184116176898469340noreply@blogger.com